Realm of Fire, plataform game

[NeilDArcPridh]

Hello guys and girls :B

I'm Neil, nice to meet you all, I want to share my video game trailer which is still on construction, please check it out :3

I will answer any of your question and opinions

here is:

If you like what you saw, check the second one:

Thank you

EDIT: youtube tags fixed

[Jubal]

Hello, welcome to Exilian

I liked the second trailer a lot more than the first - fitting this together with the hints of a plotline helped a lot. I think it might be good to get some voice acting on the trailers to give more character to the characters, if that makes sense? It seems to me that, with the relatively simple graphics and gameplay as far as I can see, the important element of the game to get people hooked is the storyline so seeing more on that would be good. Having shorter gameplay segments between the text in the trailers might help too - I often wasn't quite threading together the different bits of text in my head if that makes sense?

Looking forward to seeing what else you come up with though, good stuff

[NeilDArcPridh]

Hehehe Thank you so much for welcome me and your opinion, jejeje.

I really want to put voice acting I have no actors :/, soon I will put another trailer with more history and a little part of game play :3,

See you soon Jubal

[Jubal]

No actors is a problem that can easily be solved; I'd certainly be happy to record some lines for you, and one or two others here might be

[NeilDArcPridh]

OMG really? jajaja I need a Laugh, a crazy ass Laugh, like a psycho xD jajaja if you can help me with that I will be very thankful :3

[Jubal]

I messaged you my email address on the PM system, drop me a message