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Poetry and Artistic Writing / Re: Khans Poems
« on: October 12, 2011, 05:45:34 PM »
It's nice stuff, good imagery.
Try paying a little less attention to grammar: your starting phrases would be harder hitting if they didn't have the "so" in, I suspect.
Be nice to see more.
Try paying a little less attention to grammar: your starting phrases would be harder hitting if they didn't have the "so" in, I suspect.
Be nice to see more.