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« Reply #15 on: January 05, 2021, 10:00:50 PM »
Thank you sir! Yeah, i am working with this universe since 2008. First versions were poor and had logical mistakes, but i am improving it every year. For now - i have 2 periods - Hyperborean (20000 BC) and New Age (2596 AD). I have chronologies and stories. Chronologies need for people, who wants to know about the background story.

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« Reply #16 on: January 09, 2021, 11:46:48 PM »
Unexplored Zabergan.


The planet Zabergan Prime, located in the distant Zabergan system, belongs to the Artandir Republic. Elfurr have long dreamed of gaining access to this system, but the agreement on this has not yet been signed. At the moment, in 2596, the Zabergan planets are completely colonized. They are located in the so-called Borean sector. Of particular interest is the main exoplanet Zabergan Prime, which is also the main capital. The fact is that Artandir owns only one continent there, which is the largest. The second continent, located in the Western Hemisphere, is under the strict protection of the republican special services. By order of President Cedric, the Western Continent is not navigable or explorable. On this continent, there are Anomalous Zones that have not yet been studied by the scientific community. An attempt to explore the continent led to the disappearance of entire expeditions. The northern part of this land is inhabited by Fly-Eyes, a rare species of giants, reaching up to 60 meters in height. In the Anomalous Period, there are always temporary leaps. In addition, not far from the continent on its east coast is the historic complex of the Primordial Monoliths. These giant structures reach a height of 700-800 meters and literally pierce the clouds. According to scientists, the Monoliths are more than 18,000 years old. It is believed that they were built during the Hyperborean period. Some believe that the building structures are not ancient civilizations, but demonic creatures that came into the universe during the invasion of Cerberum. The Monolith Zone is not available for visiting. Scientists do not conduct research on them or study their internal structure. Almost nothing grows around the buildings, except for a strange poisonous weed plant known as Eat the Grass. Animals and aquatic creatures prefer not to swim up to the Primordial Monoliths and keep from them at a distance of 2-3 kilometers.
In the central part of the Western continent, there is a Mirage City, which constantly appears and disappears. Its study is also banned by Artandir's special services. Only the southern part of the Western continent is more or less inhabited, and even then not completely. There are military and research bases there. In the same sector is the fortress of the special forces of Artandir security. The total population of the mainland is 3000 people, while the other continent is home to at least 4 billion. Also, aviation does not fly over some areas of the Western continent. The authorities prefer to use drones for surveillance and it is not uncommon to lose these devices in Anomalous charts. Outlandish oceanic creatures such as the bat shark, whale melvilleon (length 58 m long), sperm whale minstrel, sea giraffe, energy fish, electric plesiosaur and dorudonum magnus (length size 120 m) live within the continent's water area. On the coasts, there are runner beluga whales (evolved terrestrial cetaceans) and sand centipede crayfish. In the western part of the continent are the ruins of the ancient city of Zaberganum. Huge ruined skyscrapers that existed thousands of years ago have survived to this day. In the process of examining the ruins, an ancient subway network was found. Only the military and intelligence agents have access to the city ruins. It is noteworthy that quite recently, in the process of exploring the ancient city, another unique form of life was discovered, known as the termite-stone flipper. These giant insects literally feed on masonry and are 8 meters tall. They usually live at night. During the day, they fall into a long sleep in the undergrounds of the city or within the former metro. Soldiers exploring the ruins very often stumble upon sleeping rockfiners.
Zabergan Prime is still of interest to many civilizations. But the Artandir Republic in every possible way rejects any requests for research on the Western continent of the planet. Moreover, recently Artandir's special services have been fixing Acheronian scout drones on the forbidden continent, apparently appearing with specific goals.

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« Reply #17 on: January 10, 2021, 12:28:28 PM »
Have you considered setting up a Wiki for all this? I wonder if that might work well as a format for all the interconnected information, so it'd be easy to jump between concepts and parts of the story :)

I like the way big settings like this can explore an awful lot of concepts in the same setting - the Zabergan monoliths sound fun, it's a similar sort of vibe to the Ancient Terran ruins in Stormwell's Frozen Skies setting.
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« Reply #18 on: January 10, 2021, 01:04:33 PM »
Hi my friend!
To be fair, i already have Wiki in TWC, but still trying to explore it. Its a bit difficult ;)
And thanks for your review! Yes, the Zabergan monoliths are, without a doubt, artifacts, but there are still the same ones. They are in the Guapalamo system. You can read about it here too. The text is near. )))

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Mensei Guapalamo system. Another galactic mystery.

An equally interesting mystery is the star system of Mensei Guapalamo, located in a sector that is dark with Farrukh. For the period of 2596, the system also belongs to the Artandir Republic. The main planet Guapalamo-1 is an exoplanet, that is, suitable for human habitation. The main population is also made up of people, and there are more than 2 billion of them. But the peculiarity of Guapalamo-1 is that there are practically no continents, and almost the entire planet is covered by the world's oceans. 2 billion people live on large islands and atolls. There are at least 10 skyscraper cities that literally stick out of the water. But an even more interesting feature is the Monolith of Mensei Guapalamo, which, according to scientists, is more than 30,000 years old. A huge obelisk-shaped building literally sticks out of the water and is located in the middle of the Central Ocean. Another attraction is the Pyramid Island of Guijaramo, where primitive savages lived until the colonization of Artandir. The island has giant stepped pyramids 230 meters high. Local savages (pale-skinned tall people) called them the legacy of the conquerors of Guapalamo. According to their beliefs, in ancient times there was a certain Mensei Guapalamo, who conquered millions of worlds. After each successful conquest, he left a giant Obelisk (perhaps this is the same Monolith), including pyramidal clusters. They were built, as a rule, by conquered peoples. It is also noteworthy that the savages believe that the return of Mensei Guapalamo is close and is about to happen. They claimed that Guapalamo appears on a giant pyramid-shaped chariot capable of lighting any star, as well as destroying it with one shot. The Artandir scientific community is still studying the pyramidal complexes on the islands, the ancient languages ​​of savages and their beliefs. But for unknown reasons, access to the Monolith of Mensei Guapalamo is completely closed to everyone except the military. Everything is further complicated by the fact that you simply cannot swim to the Monolith. Its waters are inhabited by the Colossal Kraken, reaching 85 meters in length. These octopuses also have long tentacles that can even shoot down helicopters. As with Zabergan Prime, the Elfurr Empire is eager to explore the Guapalamo system and its main planet, but the Artandir Republic does not grant such permission.


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« Reply #19 on: January 15, 2021, 11:10:12 PM »
Need to say, that i am fully finished the work with "Revenge of Tyrants. Darkness is coming". Its the full story about the Hyperborean period, 20000 BC. And i will create another topic for that. In this thread i`ll continue to work with chronologies and universe history.

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« Reply #20 on: January 19, 2021, 08:13:01 PM »

Protei Jarisay Allargar Marfur-Nirari.
Marfur-Nirari is one of the most mysterious entities in the universe. Its origin is completely unknown. Also, information about the belonging of this creature to one or another race is unknown. It is only known that there are references to Marfur-Nirari in almost every legend. His face or appearance was completely different. He can change it in one minute. Almost every intelligent civilization that exists in the universe has ever encountered this mysterious demigod. As eyewitnesses say, Marfur-Nirari possessed truly divine power, could destroy entire continents and restore them, could change matter and energy, and control the movements of planetary nuclei. Most civilizations considered him the greatest threat. It is also known that it was Marfur-Nirari, along with other kings, who founded the city of Eridu about 90,000 years BC on the planet Earth (Geos). Many people feared him and took him for a god. He bestowed his technologies on many civilizations, but in return, he demanded that they worship and build ziggurats in honor of him and the god Cerberum. Cerberum was considered by Marfur-Nirar to be a higher being than himself. In any case, the threat from these entities is very real. According to some reports, they destroyed at least 20 advanced civilizations in the universe.

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« Reply #21 on: January 20, 2021, 04:30:17 PM »
Ii-Uu race and their main secret

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The universe is full of extinct civilizations. Only Sovi-Lars are known, perhaps, to every scientific community. Also, traces of the Mirovians were recently discovered, another ancient race that existed on Earth hundreds of millions of years before our era. But even more interesting is the mysterious extinct civilization Ii-Uu, which previously dominated the star sectors of Zibiel. Judging by the remains of ancient temples and the frescoes on them, Ii-UU owned at least half of the known galaxy. Perhaps they had territories in other galaxies, like M33 or Andromeda. Their temples are found not only in the Zibiel sectors, but also in very distant star systems. The Ii-Uu were similar to the prehistoric animals of the chalicotherium. Despite their technological development, they appear naked in the frescoes. Ii-Uu did not have consonants in their language. Their sounds were also vowels. They called their home planet in the Zibiel sector Ii-Au. The state they built among the stars was named A`Aa. Ii-Uu wrote that they spread their influence in hundreds of thousands of star systems.

Apparently, they interacted with the Sovilar and with another race, more similar to the descriptions of Elfurr. Their chronicles also include an all-out galactic war with the mysterious fire-breathing people of Aa-Ee (possibly the Draconians?). It is not known exactly how the Ii-Uu civilization ceased to exist. The inscriptions on one of their cylindrical temples on the planet Travescus say about a mysterious deity who came to them from another world. According to Ii-Uu themselves, this deity quarreled them with each other, and then led an army of "inverted pyramids" to their doorstep. The last chronicle reported that the name of the deity cannot be mentioned, since it can hear and recognize the one who calls it. The civilization of Ii-Uu still remains a mystery to all scientists in the universe. The only surviving techno artifact is the Temporum, the energy rod of one of their kings. A wand that briefly stops time when certain symbols are activated. At the moment "Temporum" is in the territory of Elfurr, possibly in the palace of their supreme ruler. Nothing more has survived from this civilization. Only abandoned temples, frescoes and monuments.

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« Reply #22 on: January 24, 2021, 03:48:55 PM »
Ga`TT Collective


Race Ga-TT is a cephalopod molluscs, more like the ancient ammonites. They have no sex, they are hermaphrodites and reproduce by internal fertilization. They move on their huge tentacles. They can grow up to 6-7 meters in height. The main part of the body is covered with a powerful shell. Such a bizarre shape did not prevent Ga-TT from creating a powerful civilization on the home planet of Chlalaka`tachklankla and mastering space travel. In ancient times, the Ga-TT preferred to stay away from other races. But later, they nevertheless entered into an alliance with the civilization of the octopus Illis, who owned 30 star systems.
The Ga-TT was never included to any coalitions of galaxy. Moreover, long before the creation of the Coalition of the Galaxy, the Ga-TT Collective launched a massive invasion of Artandir Republic. This invasion almost destroyed all life on the territory of this state. But the Artandirians managed to hold back the offensive and push Ga-TT back. In 2593, during the Acheron Council, the supreme ruler of Ga-TT Tlalkchlkla`lulalkchlaalaktl made an official alliance with the Unn-Chor race and its leader Olmek R`landrris. At the end of the same year, the Ga-TT race joined the Acheronian League. The "Bellemnite" fleet was joined to the League's Grand Squadron. Now they are enemies of the Coalition.

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« Reply #23 on: January 24, 2021, 05:39:25 PM »
Ooh, space chalicotheres! (Incidentally, a concept I also used: you can find a chalicothere-based monster in my game LIFE, if you've seen that).

Also very much like the giant ammonite people too :)
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« Reply #24 on: January 24, 2021, 08:29:02 PM »
Yeah. Thank you! ;) If you see, my universe have a lot of races and states, maybe 1 hundred. Also there were a lot of extinced races. But all of them were probably destroyed by the Marfur-Nirari. (about this thing you can read above the Ii-Uu article).

And about your game LIFE - its very interesting! where i can find this concept? ;)

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« Reply #25 on: January 25, 2021, 09:41:54 PM »
Illis Compound


The Illis race were native to the planet Tlunaklatli. They were octopus-like humanoids who lived mainly in water bodies. They preferred to stay away from the rest of the universe. Their only allies were Ga-TT, a race of intelligent ammonites from the planet Chlalaka. In ancient times, Illis was nearly slaughtered by the Narwalingen (humanoid whales) race. But miraculously managed to survive the invasion. Illis is distrustful of all outsiders. They do not have close ties with other races, with the exception of Ga-TT. For a long time, they preferred not to contact the galactic community at all. The Illis preferred to stay in their ancestral territories and not go beyond their borders. Their main state have name is Compound, and have republican style of government.

They only made contact after the war with the Elfurr Empire. Elfurr needed some minerals that were only mined underwater. After the confrontation with Elfurr, the Compound Illis Council (in their language, its "Tlalk`lank`kla") decided that it was impossible to continue the fight. Illis were forced to give all the minerals to the invaders and become their vassals. However, already in 2593 after the proclamation of the Acheron League, this underwater race declared war on Elfurr. According to the prophecies of Illis, by the end of the 26th century, a certain Primordial God, He Who Can Rule The Water, Dry-Land and Stars, should appear in the universe, who, as wizards say, can destroy all Elfurr in the whole universe. Therefore, the Illis armored fleet is currently actively helping the League in the fight against their main enemy.

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« Reply #26 on: January 27, 2021, 03:46:07 PM »
Racism problems in the Age of 2596 AD


There have always been problems with racism. Accordingly, they also affected the era of the 26th century. The main difficulty lies in the fact that many representatives of individual civilizations prefer copulation with aliens. Because of this, sometimes there is a danger of the appearance of hybrid forms.
For example, long before the Acheronian War, the inhabitants of the planet Tratorius, consisting mainly of humans, preferred to have relationships with representatives of the lizard-like Draconid race. As a result, this led to the emergence of a hybrid race - the Tratorians. Not everyone favors the Tratorians. They look like people overgrown with thorns, scales and, in some cases, horns. They are considered mutants by most of the galactic community. But still, the Tratorians are part of the Draconian Empire, and in the event of a global war, they are ready to speak for the Coalition.
There were also connections between the Draconid races and the wolf-like Kinos. This led to the creation of the Drakokinos race. They live in the Philistine star system and are always ready to speak for the Coalition. But despite the fact that the Drakokinos are in fact also mutants, the attitude towards them from the galactic community is softer. But when people have relationships with aliens, this is most of all perceived with hostility.

Humans also very often make relationships with Elfurr and marry their representatives. (Elfurr has the most beautiful women.) But still, Elfurr are almost similar to humans form, and stand out only by their tall stature, sharp ears and psi-abilities. In principle, this is treated with understanding.



Naturally, there are organizations in the galaxy that are opposed to racial mixing. Most of these communities are prevalent in the human world. One such organization calls itself the "High Race". It was created from people-fanatics who believe that God commanded all his children not to indulge in fornication and to love only the representatives of their race. Fanatics attack all mutants and hybrids. They are also known for their terrorist attacks. That is why the Coalition has listed this organization as extremist. There are also many more groups created from all sorts of monastic orders and fanatical cults. All of them are strongly opposed to interracial relations. Some even consider all aliens to be "demons".

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« Reply #27 on: January 28, 2021, 02:08:56 PM »
Regarding space Chalicotheres, they're in the game LIFE which you can get here (it's a free download): https://jubalbarca.itch.io/life
And there's a subforum here: https://exilian.co.uk/forum/index.php?board=240.0

It interests me that you ping the idea of racism and discrimination as being mainly based in humans in your setting, since you say most of the anti-miscegenation communities are prevalent in the human world. Are most species more socially open about this in your setting and humans quite a conservative-minded outlier group, then?
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« Reply #28 on: January 28, 2021, 10:52:27 PM »
Super, my friend! i`ll try your game, it looks amazing, to be honest ;)

Now about racism. In fact, most humans in my universe tend to have relationships with women from other races. This is a fairly popular phenomenon. Among the Elfurr race, for example, there are no ugly creatures at all, there are no those with flaws. Essentially, every elfurr girl looks like a rank 1 supermodel. Moreover, Elfurr do not age yet. They only die at 500-600 years old. In old age, their skin turns yellow a little, but does not wrinkle. Their beauty is forever. In addition, they have almost limitless sexual abilities (they can control the child born also, and can control the whole process of it). Elfurr girls attract million humans.
This is what makes many human fanatics scream in rage. Racist organizations regard marriages with aliens as heresy and betrayal of humanity. Therefore, they are ruthless towards other world species and hybrids. The Great Coalition of the Galaxy condemns the actions of extremists and imprisons them. But they still keep appearing.

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« Reply #29 on: February 23, 2021, 08:30:19 PM »
Neferirikar race and its short history


The Neferirikar race is also called "gnomes" or "kobolds" in another way. All because of their small stature and beard. Although in reality they hate being called gnomes and are even ready to fight for it. That being said, Neferirikar really does resemble those same dwarves from many fantasy worlds. Since ancient times, they have been allies of the Elfurr Empire and its main friends. At the time of the Acheron War (nowadays), the Neferirikarian King Sirion Hammerbear is actively fighting for Elfurr. His people are direct allies of the Elfurr Empire. This means that if anyone attacks Elfurr, the Neferirikar will immediately intervene.
This race has amazing technology. They are masters of building robots and complex machines. In addition, it is they who entangle many Elfurr worlds with infrastructure. They are masters almost in all technologies. But they did not always have friendship with their sharp-eared friends. Once upon a time in distant antiquity, the Neferirikar fought with Elfurr. Particularly memorable is the confrontation between Elfurr and Neferirikar, known as the War of the Short Legs. It happened 22,500 years before our era. In that time the elfurrian king Amhar the Serpent quarreled with the neferirikarian king Shardan Bluebeard over questions about excessive hairiness. Amhar thought that the neferirikarian were too hairy, did not shave, and looked like barbarians, and he often said about it. Shardan was insulted and soon declared war on Amhar because of offendings and a grave resentment. The "dwarf" army managed to prove their superiority, and very soon Neferirikar warriors almost took the capital of Elfurr. It was a greatest battle with name of Beards Massacre.
Amhar died in battle. His head was down by the axe of Shardan. As it turned out, elfurr ruler planned to exterminate all the neferirikarian altogether and was only waiting for an excuse to declare war. But Bluebeard uncovered this conspiracy in time. After the war, Queen of Elfurr Totkhemris IV Azariel reconciled with Neferirikar. From now on, both peoples began to live in peace and harmony, and soon they entered into an Eternal Union.
Eternal Union is still exists. And there is also the biggest statue of both rulers - Totkhemris IV and Shardan the Bluebeard. This statue was built in the planet Nirotiel.
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