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Re: The Limo Driver "The Secret Agent"
« Reply #15 on: July 05, 2016, 12:40:30 PM »
Yeah, OK, agreed :)
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Re: The Limo Driver "The Secret Agent"
« Reply #16 on: July 17, 2016, 06:48:27 PM »
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Re: The Limo Driver "The Secret Agent"
« Reply #17 on: July 17, 2016, 09:26:42 PM »
Fantastic! Great to see it start taking shape :)
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Re: The Limo Driver "The Secret Agent"
« Reply #18 on: July 20, 2016, 05:54:18 PM »
Thanks  bro for keep following ..

I'm thinking actually in create a campaign .. and I need help

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Re: The Limo Driver "The Secret Agent"
« Reply #19 on: July 20, 2016, 11:59:30 PM »
What d'you need/what are your plans? :)
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Re: The Limo Driver "The Secret Agent"
« Reply #20 on: July 21, 2016, 03:28:08 AM »
I'm working on a trailer for the game .. but the problem I'm weak on marketing

How people will know .. this what I need

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Re: The Limo Driver "The Secret Agent"
« Reply #21 on: July 21, 2016, 07:47:58 AM »
"In a world where you can trust no one..."

"In a city where evil rots away at its core..."

"[something about the government needing you to kill corrupt officials]"

"Become... the limo driver!" >dramatic music

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Re: The Limo Driver "The Secret Agent"
« Reply #22 on: July 21, 2016, 12:45:00 PM »
Wow ... it's great  :)

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Re: The Limo Driver "The Secret Agent"
« Reply #23 on: July 21, 2016, 02:05:28 PM »
If you want a voice actor, I'm game for having a go (I have a fairly deep British-accented voice) :)

And Eric's site might be good for looking for some free trailer music: http://exilian.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=4582
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Re: The Limo Driver "The Secret Agent"
« Reply #24 on: July 21, 2016, 02:16:45 PM »
Great bro ... yes I want  :D

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Re: The Limo Driver "The Secret Agent"
« Reply #25 on: July 22, 2016, 05:16:37 PM »
Cool, drop me a message (or I will at some point) and we can discuss further :)
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Re: The Limo Driver "The Secret Agent"
« Reply #26 on: July 22, 2016, 07:33:47 PM »
Great, I well send you message if I completed the trailer render

And I need your opinion about the website and my article on IndieDB
 
IndieDB : http://www.indiedb.com/games/the-secret-agent
Website : http://the-secret-agent.netai.net/

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Re: The Limo Driver "The Secret Agent"
« Reply #27 on: July 26, 2016, 12:03:51 AM »
They're both generally good, and the screenshots look good which helps carry the rest of it :)

One thing of course for both is that your English has a few quirks to it, particularly in how you form verbs: it's easy to understand, and can generally be read easily, but when you get further through production it might help to have a native speaker re-word things (I'm happy to help with that) to make it read more smoothly for your audience. (What is your first language, out of interest?)

With the website, I'd say try to make more of the screenshots the same size or more centred; it looks a bit jumbled on the page because every image is a different size.
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Re: The Limo Driver "The Secret Agent"
« Reply #28 on: July 26, 2016, 06:54:52 PM »
The real big problem is my English  ;D

Thank you bro, I will update the website .. And I'm closer to complete the trailer

All the best

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Re: The Limo Driver "The Secret Agent"
« Reply #29 on: July 30, 2016, 10:58:44 PM »
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