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Writing, Poems, AARs, and Stories - The Storyteller's Hall / Re: Post your best extracts
« on: June 24, 2018, 12:51:08 PM »
OK, here's one. Most of my dialogue doesn't work well out of context, but I think this holds up reasonably well:
"Kara?" Lissy whispered into the younger girl's open door. A silhouette at the window turned to face her.
"Oh...Lissy? You're still up?" Kara whispered back.
"Had some thinking to do."
"How did that go?"
"Not well. Rafe came by to tell me something, and now I have even more to think about. So I've accomplished negative net thinking for the evening." She sighed. "Story of my life."
"Kara?" Lissy whispered into the younger girl's open door. A silhouette at the window turned to face her.
"Oh...Lissy? You're still up?" Kara whispered back.
"Had some thinking to do."
"How did that go?"
"Not well. Rafe came by to tell me something, and now I have even more to think about. So I've accomplished negative net thinking for the evening." She sighed. "Story of my life."