I'm writing a sci-fi!

Started by Lizard, July 01, 2014, 07:46:51 PM

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Lizard

July 01, 2014, 07:46:51 PM
There's not really more to it than that.

Here's the synopsis: Gael Valentine, captain of The Valkyrie, is wanted for treason against Earth's highest council. He escapes from custody, with the help of his crew, and takes to the stars. When running low on supplies they stop to raid a seemingly dormant ship, only to find that it is the legendary Azrael and its cyborg crew. Devoid of their humanity, the cyborgs are unstoppable in their quest to fulfil their prime directive: survive.

You can follow it on Tumblr using the tag #tsbu (or by following l-a-felton.tumblr.com), or you can follow me on Wattpad http://www.wattpad.com/l-a-felton

Just fyi, really. Also I'm REALLY EXCITED to be writing in this genre, it's new for me and I thought you Exilianites might appreciate it. x
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Cuddly Khan

#1
July 01, 2014, 09:49:59 PM
I LOVE SCI-FI STORIES!! :o Sounds awesome, definitely going to read it!
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Lizard

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July 01, 2014, 09:56:38 PM
I THOUGHT YOU MIGHT.

Also thank you, it means a lot to grow my readership, if only by one!
A coder, a hoodie, a coffee pot, a robot.

"A ship in port is safe, but that is not what ships are built for."

Cuddly Khan

#3
July 01, 2014, 10:09:00 PM
I will try and get back to you with some constructive criticism after I read it. :)
Quote from: comrade_general on January 25, 2014, 01:22:10 AMMost effective elected official. Ever. (not counting Jubal)

He is Jubal the modder, Jubal the wayfarer, Jubal the admin. And he has come to me now, at the turning of the tide.

Lizard

#4
July 01, 2014, 10:16:11 PM
Thanks - just be kind, I'm literally posting it as I write it, sans editing. I plan to release a more refined version after Camp NaNoWriMo finishes...
A coder, a hoodie, a coffee pot, a robot.

"A ship in port is safe, but that is not what ships are built for."

Cuddly Khan

#5
July 01, 2014, 10:21:08 PM
When I said 'constructive criticism' I mainly meant typos and small errors. :P Not stuff like "You story sucks, make it better by doing this this and this".
Quote from: comrade_general on January 25, 2014, 01:22:10 AMMost effective elected official. Ever. (not counting Jubal)

He is Jubal the modder, Jubal the wayfarer, Jubal the admin. And he has come to me now, at the turning of the tide.

Lizard

#6
July 01, 2014, 10:27:22 PM
*phew* I'm off the hook!
A coder, a hoodie, a coffee pot, a robot.

"A ship in port is safe, but that is not what ships are built for."

comrade_general

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July 02, 2014, 12:02:07 AM
Quote from: The Khan on July 01, 2014, 10:21:08 PM
When I said 'constructive criticism' I mainly meant typos and small errors. :P Not stuff like "You story sucks, make it better by doing this this and this".
Once again - like you can really give anyone else tips on spelling errors, KHAN! :P

Cuddly Khan

#8
July 02, 2014, 02:52:23 AM
Hahaha! I suppose not. :P But I can try.
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Tom

#9
July 02, 2014, 05:54:36 PM
Looks awesome, when I have more time I'll look in to it :)

Jubal

#10
July 07, 2014, 11:37:42 PM
Yay scifi :)

I will read some but I'm making myself get further with my own writing first!
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