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Re: Andalus' poetry
« Reply #120 on: March 16, 2012, 09:44:47 AM »
:) I like it how you made it over exaggerated. It's cool. You won't leave will you? We've had so many unexplained disappearances. One more would make it worse, your poems is one of the main highlights of this forum, you too. :)
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Re: Andalus' poetry
« Reply #121 on: March 22, 2012, 10:31:03 PM »
Snare

I'm pawing at the snare, caught around my neck,
Tugging at the tightened wire, stuck in the trap you set.
I know I can't escape, but nor is that my will.
I'm straining just to make your hold even tighter still.
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Re: Andalus' poetry
« Reply #122 on: March 29, 2012, 08:30:08 PM »
I am too happy these days. Happiness is not good for a poet!

Banquet for a Muse

Misery feeds the muse a bitter banquet,
A more nourishing meal than joy.
Madness is a curse, but be sure to thank it,
It gives your tongue and pen employ.
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Re: Andalus' poetry
« Reply #123 on: April 05, 2012, 05:00:13 PM »
You may have heard about the fires in Galica last week that have ravaged the forest of Fragas do Eume. It is one of the oldest forests in Europe, and has lost perhaps a thousand hectares due to this tragedy. Here is my lament.


Laid on the Forest Pyre

"We shall burn like the heathen kings of old."

The lifegiver has no mercy for his eldest children;
With ruthless love he smothers them with hot air,
Shrivels their branches and scorches their leaves
In all the oven-fired shades of terracotta.

He paints the breaking ground in his own image,
Staining every blade yellow to become his mirror;
The reflection fracturing across the gasping hillside,
Roots of parched trees bursting the dusty horror.

With the heat of burning passion he embraces them,
His parchment-dry fingers scarring their bark
As they writhe to clamber free of his smother,
As his smouldering touch of love begins to spark.

Amour to ignite the withered shell of ancient armour,
Sweltering before the ardent tongues of flame
Leaping from the brush to whisper across the bark,
Then like violent whipcracks shrieking father's name.

Merciless love piercing through the hardened scales,
To kindle the heartwood where deep hides the soul.
Spirits fly up screaming from the stricken brands,
Choking their last breaths with bitter stench of coal.

A broken scowl of agony spreads through druids' groves,
Beacons of pain tearing all across a glowing ridge,
Torches that emblazon a blaze over the bloody moon,
As the crazed father hurls himself from the sky's edge.

And in lifeless darkness the forest's pyre is raised,
Raging its way through the sacred paths of centuries.
Roars of pain blaze the trail of soulless demons,
Laying waste the ancient ghosts of history.

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Re: Andalus' poetry
« Reply #124 on: April 06, 2012, 01:47:17 AM »
LOL, those dear have the right idea. :P
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Re: Andalus' poetry
« Reply #125 on: April 19, 2012, 07:00:10 PM »
Hierophant

Let logic be your hierophant,
And wisdom your confessor.
Seek justice as your only lord,
And none to be your lesser.
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Re: Andalus' poetry
« Reply #126 on: May 03, 2012, 04:00:54 PM »
View from a Multi-Storey Bike Rack

When you leave Amsterdam, what you would give
For the view from the top of a multi-storey bike rack
Over centuries-old curiosa shops selling bric-a-brac,
Domed and spired roofs shielding grand station halls,
Ornate palaces, lit up gold over silver canals,

Venus and Jupiter chasing each other along waterways,
Watching themselves from high above the sluiced maze,
And to feel the evening wind chill touch you to the hilt,
As you stand on Holland's highest hill, lifted on stilts.

The ascent is the steepest to be found for leagues;
The ride down is all the gravity you'll ever feel

In that country where even grapes are flat, the seeds
Spilled and crushed beneath fixed-wheeled stampedes,
Like red and green jewels decorating the cycle lane,
Far below you on the street on the plain mortal plane.

Down from there is the sweetest ride you will make
And also the hardest goodbye, as you leave to take
Waves and wings, to a different home.
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Re: Andalus' poetry
« Reply #127 on: May 10, 2012, 04:00:25 PM »
Featherless Serpent

There is a two-headed snake on the roof of the airport,
Hiding among the concentric castles of ceiling vents.
Two forked tongues sprouting from the teeth of a forked neck.
It's there, I can see it through the roof's translucent panels,
Dormant against the corrugated curve, basking in the sun.

Don't tell me it's not there, not until you've lain back
On a lounge bench in that enclosure, head on a rucksack,
Soft as a stone pillow, and gazed up through webbed ladders
At curious shapes and dark shadows among the sieved sunlight,

As your tongue cradles a pencil, gripped between teeth,
Hanging upwards from the lip like a ruminant cigarette.
No smoking allowed, of course, for the hazard it brings,
But no regulation can stop me inhaling a puff of dreams.

And I'll tell you this, for your health and safety check:
The greater hazard is that unfledged serpent up there,
Lurking, watching jets hurl themselves over the fence,
And secretly, desperately, wishing for all the world
That he was Quetzalcoatl, or Jörmungandr.
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Re: Andalus' poetry
« Reply #128 on: May 12, 2012, 02:47:09 AM »
My favorites by you are the Five-Leaved Clover and The Culver and the Culverin. :) They're really good.
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« Reply #129 on: June 22, 2012, 10:19:07 PM »
I am very much in awe of your literary prowess. You should update more often :P
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Re: Andalus' poetry
« Reply #130 on: July 10, 2012, 11:48:45 AM »
He used to have a new one for us every weak!! Don't know what's happened to him though. :(
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Re: Andalus' poetry
« Reply #131 on: July 12, 2012, 02:34:04 PM »
Just not been feeling too inspired lately, and I didn't want to force it. Trying to finish up some older poems, though.

Thanks, kaleidoscopicmind!
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Re: Andalus' poetry
« Reply #132 on: August 01, 2012, 11:27:17 PM »
:) I can't wait to read some more of your poetic awesomeness. ;D
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Re: Andalus' poetry
« Reply #133 on: August 16, 2012, 04:29:57 PM »
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As wiry strength begins to fail,
the moment of farewell draws near,
and soon the fountain of Wikipedian lore
shall flow with the fell news
that knowledge has fallen
and all is now "was" that was "is" before.
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Re: Andalus' poetry
« Reply #134 on: August 23, 2012, 03:15:46 PM »
Clawing Silver

To befriend a beautiful cat that isn't yours
Is like falling in love with a pretty wh-re.
It's to know you're not the only whisperer of her name,
Not the only one who strokes her hair, but all the same,
Your love she takes as credit and she will owe you only pain,
The day you see your lover hearken to another's call
And she leaves you feeling foolish and betrayed.
Still her claws like silver thorns whisper a name into your skin,
Ever closer to your heart, and with purrs still draws you in.
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