Thoughts;
- Still funny, but needs condensing. Don't do it in one take, or there's too much ramble between gags. Dead space is the worst thing for videos.
- Keep it to a 5 minute maximum, you lose people otherwise.
- Pick one topic. All my list of odd suggestions (which were actually sarcasm in the first place) didn't really yield any humour.
- Try and keep the Exilian topic reading to a minimum, focus on the jokes you want to get over.
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