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Unforgettable Drama
« on: October 31, 2009, 11:56:50 AM »
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« Reply #1 on: October 31, 2009, 12:04:40 PM »
Excellent writing! The really good thing about this is that it has a lot of drama but wraps itself up very fast; my own problem when writing short stories is that when I increase the drama the story gets miles too long; yours still manages to be short and is powerfully written as well.  :)
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« Reply #2 on: October 31, 2009, 12:31:45 PM »
Thank you. It has quite a bit of drama in it but I like the way I ended it (even though it was a heart breaking).  :)
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